Last week was a difficult week when it came to writing. I had too many distractions, so I couldn't really get the words out in my head. So this means that I'm posting a double chapter this week.
Dolcett Girls 27: Unwrapping (F-solo)
This was a completely new chapter from the 2009 version. One of the biggest frustrations is that my skill has improved since then. Not to mention, I skipped the strangest things in the original version, like sex scenes that I really like writing. Sadly, this doesn't have much in the sex scene, but it does fill in some important parts of the story that I think advance the plot nicely.
One of the things I wanted to point out is that Sonja is scared when she is doing all of these kidnappings. There are still some small shreds of humanity left inside her; actually, I hope a lot of humanity in there, but there are moments of “am I going to get caught” that I think are important.
Not to mention, she makes mistakes. I don't like perfect people and, last I checked, there isn't a class on “how to strip, torture, and eat your sexy enemies” in high school. Fuck, I'd go to that class, but I'd probably be one of the class volunteers.
But, this is a good anticipation chapter filled with some naked girls bound on the floor of a laundry room.
Dolcett Girls 28: Brutal Remarks (F-solo)
I seriously considered debreasting Sonja in this chapter. I got so fucking close but then decided it would have ruined the rest of the story. It is one of my hot buttons, but I couldn't really get it into the story. Which is a bummer.
But, that said, you can probably guess, the guillotine plays a prevalent role in this chapter.
I wonder if I should just get someone else involved, simply to cut off some lovely breasts…?